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FFXIV Chocobo riding!! Guess where??

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I'm not very good at critiques, but I'll do my best. I've always loved your Final Fantasy artworks.
The detail in this is really amazing. The background really capturing and adds a lot to this as a whole. The chocobos in the foreground are what makes this piece, the angle is really awesome. I love the wormhole view, and this is very well done.
I do feel like the chocobo in the right corner's head is angled slightly funny, like it's looking down instead of straight. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but it just feels off. Over all though, it's very nice. The leaves flying up add a lot to the motion. I love it :)
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The picture runs the risk of being right heavy with the dark colors of the chocobos on the right conflicting with the light colors of the crystal on the left. A change to maintain balance would be to darken the crystal on the left to create more shade weight. The size and distance reference should hold because the crystal has the structures in place to show size comparison. Light source needs to be clarified, too. I can sort of tell it's coming from behind the two chocobos, but the buildings do not reflect the lighting and the shadows on the ground aren't clear.

Pros of this piece though are use of color, speckling to create light in the air, and expression of your figures. Too many times I've seen people do beautiful scenes and neglect the faces of the characters in them, or done beautiful figures and you can still see every single paint stroke of the background. This could easily be a promo for FFXIV, because while I am nit picky about some aspects of the picture, as a whole it holds together very nicely and invokes nostalgic memories of my time in FFXI and my still ongoing contemplation of joining FFXIV.

Good work, and keep improving!
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tomaniana Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
hihi, i love it. i totally had the chocobo song in my head as soon as i did look at your picture xD
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GoldenFlame-star Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful... :D
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sakonma Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015
OMG THIS IS SO COOL!!! Love the drawing and all the details dear aaah sosososo amazing ´7` 
//and maaan wish I could play this game!! GAAAH ONE DAY I WILL! :icontardmanplz:
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ShinigamiRyuku Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
WOW! Amazing! Awesome work on perspective!
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cogwurx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Professional Interface Designer
Fantastic!
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contraplex Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015   Digital Artist
the perspective on the right chocobos leg seems kinda weird
that aside though i like the rest.. especially the sky and the aetheryte :)
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snoweffectjw Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG heavensward!! which server u play in? o.o
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XandImus Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015   General Artist
so grand x-il-ent! L_L
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tambri-art Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Pharos Sirius in the background!  Lovin it!  <3
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ElinTan Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015   Digital Artist
<3 Yeah! Thank you!!
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HappylikeHappy Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Really beautiful *-*
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Unazaki Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015
Dat ending XD
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Andiliion Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student General Artist
looks kinda like somewhere in la noscea .u. 
anyway, its great! :D
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ElinTan Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015   Digital Artist
Yeah!! It is ahhaha x'D Thank you!!
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gyappumusoka Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great Fanart!
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
This is nice
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ElinTan Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015   Digital Artist
Thank you!!
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sulyia Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015   Digital Artist
it looks amazing qwq
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